मेरे पापा हैं सबसे प्यारे,
और हम सबके दिल के तारे।
कभी-कभी वह क्रोध भी करते,
लेकिन मुझे सबसे ज्यादा स्नेह भी करते।
जब भी जरूरत पड़ती कभी न पीछे हटते,
पूरे परिवार की पतवार को है बांधे रखते।
तनिक-तनिक मुझको है सताते,
पर मेरे साथ ही अधिक समय हैं बिताते।
हम सबको इतनी प्यार है वह करते,
अपनी चिंता कभी भी हमें न बताते।
मेरे दिल की खुशी है पापा,
मेरी जिंदगी की डोर है पापा।
धूप-छांव में काम करते हैं मेरे पापा,
हर सितम सह जाते अकेले मेरे पापा।
मेरी जिंदगी है मेरे पापा,
मेरी पहचान है मेरे पापा।
-तकशील आरिगम, हरमन माइनर स्कूल भीमताल
June 2, 2020
Love you beta.
You have composed such a nice poem.This shows how much you love your papa. God bless you! Keep it up!
June 2, 2020
Amazing poem.. well written Taksheel
June 3, 2020
Nice poem dear Taksheel .keep it up beta.God bless you
June 3, 2020
Good job.. Well done. Keep it up..
June 3, 2020
Wow..what a beautiful lines..your poem inspiring me..God bless u & keep writing dear….
June 4, 2020
Keep it up boi….
June 4, 2020
Bohat sundar kavita
June 10, 2020
Very well expressed beta.God bless you and your family
June 2, 2020
Well done Taksheel, Nice poem, Keep going like this.
June 3, 2020
Beautiful lines.amazing
June 2, 2020
पापा पापा ओ मेरे पापा सबसे प्यारे हो तुम पापा ,
छोटी थी जब मैं दुनिया में आई,
पापा पापा ओ मेरे पापा,
गोंद में ले लिया था तुमने पापा ,
तब से बन गई थी,
में पापा की नन्ही परी,
पापा पापा ओ मेरे पापा,
June 2, 2020
Good Taksheel.Lovely poem.
June 2, 2020
Very good Taksheel….
June 3, 2020
Very Nice Dear Takshu
Very adorable & encouraging
Would really look forward many more now
Good Luck & All the best
Love you
June 2, 2020
Wow such an amazing poem.God bless you.
June 2, 2020
Very nice lines beta
Keep it up!
June 2, 2020
Beautiful lines takshu…God bless you always..Yes a father is the best person always
June 2, 2020
Beautiful lines…keep it up !!!
God bless you beta.
June 3, 2020
Very nice God bless you beta u
June 2, 2020
Very nice beta
Keep it up!
June 2, 2020
Wow…touching lines..God bless u Taksheel..Proud of u my genius boy.Yes Fathers are always Great .they sacrifice so much for us.Thanks to all fathers including mine..
June 2, 2020
Good Master Takshil,
The poem shows your inclination towards your family.
Keep it up, my good wishes and congratulations to you and your family.
Regards
Dr. Anand verma.
June 2, 2020
Wow! Well written.Beautifully described the bond nd love of father and son .Luv you Takshu.Stay blessed.”Sky is the limit”.
June 2, 2020
Excellent poem writing by Taksheel Arigam. True hearted son has described his father’s dedication to the family in a simple and true way.
Pray for your bright academic future.
June 2, 2020
Awesome, keep it up.
June 3, 2020
Brilliant & Affectionate Poem,
Written by Dear Taksheel
for his Dear Papa …….
I am So Happily Surprised
to see his Talent at such a Tender age.
God Bless U Taksheel and I hope Dear,
U’ll Keep Creating, many more
Such Cute Poems and may be even
some Interesting Stories too ……
For U Dear
My
B e s t W i s h e s
June 2, 2020
Very nice lines….. Takshil
June 2, 2020
Fabulous . Keep it up.
June 2, 2020
Wow!!!! Keep it up!!!
June 2, 2020
Good going, Keep it up!
June 2, 2020
Weldone Takshu . God bless uh wd more nd more success . Luv uh beta
June 3, 2020
Super se be Super Hai aapke Papa
June 3, 2020
Super se be Super Hai aapke Papa
Nice one keep going
June 3, 2020
Very good. Nice poem. Every child can connect to it. Close to heart.
June 3, 2020
Nice poem.
You described the relation between a father and a child in these few lines.
Keep it up!!
God bless you.
June 3, 2020
Very Good beta… Keep it up… God bless u always….
June 3, 2020
bahut he badiya
bahut achi poem lagi
keep it up
god bless and luv u beta ji
June 3, 2020
Nice poem beta. God bless you. Keep it up
June 3, 2020
Wonderful beta. Nice poem ,you have written beautiful lines about father which in real sense depicts that father is the backbone of family. Appreciation for ur efforts. Keep it up.
June 3, 2020
Beautiful poetry beta, keep going and all the best.
June 3, 2020
Vry nice beta…keep it up..bohut acha lga hume yeh..it was so nice nd god bless uh..
June 3, 2020
Nice poem
Valuable message
God bless u dear
You
June 4, 2020
Nice poem keep it up you don good job don’t stop writing
June 4, 2020
Amazing … Beta god bless you and congrats….
June 4, 2020
Bhut badya, God Bless