June 02, 2020 45Comments

पूरे परिवार की पतवार पापा

मेरे पापा हैं सबसे प्यारे,
और हम सबके दिल के तारे।

कभी-कभी वह क्रोध भी करते,
लेकिन मुझे सबसे ज्यादा स्नेह भी करते।
जब भी जरूरत पड़ती कभी न पीछे हटते,
पूरे परिवार की पतवार को है बांधे रखते।

तनिक-तनिक मुझको है सताते,
पर मेरे साथ ही अधिक समय हैं बिताते।
हम सबको इतनी प्यार है वह करते,
अपनी चिंता कभी भी हमें न बताते।

मेरे दिल की खुशी है पापा,
मेरी जिंदगी की डोर है पापा।
धूप-छांव में काम करते हैं मेरे पापा,
हर सितम सह जाते अकेले मेरे पापा।

मेरी जिंदगी है मेरे पापा,
मेरी पहचान है मेरे पापा।

-तकशील आरिगम, हरमन माइनर स्कूल भीमताल

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45 comments

  1. Love you beta.
    You have composed such a nice poem.This shows how much you love your papa. God bless you! Keep it up!

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    1. Amazing poem.. well written Taksheel

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      1. Nice poem dear Taksheel .keep it up beta.God bless you

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        1. Good job.. Well done. Keep it up..

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      2. Wow..what a beautiful lines..your poem inspiring me..God bless u & keep writing dear….

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        1. Keep it up boi….

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          1. Bohat sundar kavita

      3. Very well expressed beta.God bless you and your family

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    2. Well done Taksheel, Nice poem, Keep going like this.

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      1. Beautiful lines.amazing

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  2. पापा पापा ओ मेरे पापा सबसे प्यारे हो तुम पापा ,
    छोटी थी जब मैं दुनिया में आई,
    पापा पापा ओ मेरे पापा,
    गोंद में ले लिया था तुमने पापा ,
    तब से बन गई थी,
    में पापा की नन्ही परी,
    पापा पापा ओ मेरे पापा,

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  3. Good Taksheel.Lovely poem.

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  4. Very good Taksheel….

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    1. Very Nice Dear Takshu
      Very adorable & encouraging
      Would really look forward many more now
      Good Luck & All the best
      Love you

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  5. Wow such an amazing poem.God bless you.

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  6. Very nice lines beta
    Keep it up!

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  7. Beautiful lines takshu…God bless you always..Yes a father is the best person always

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    1. Beautiful lines…keep it up !!!
      God bless you beta.

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      1. Very nice God bless you beta u

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  8. Very nice beta
    Keep it up!

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    1. Wow…touching lines..God bless u Taksheel..Proud of u my genius boy.Yes Fathers are always Great .they sacrifice so much for us.Thanks to all fathers including mine..

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  9. Good Master Takshil,
    The poem shows your inclination towards your family.
    Keep it up, my good wishes and congratulations to you and your family.

    Regards
    Dr. Anand verma.

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  10. Wow! Well written.Beautifully described the bond nd love of father and son .Luv you Takshu.Stay blessed.”Sky is the limit”.

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  11. Excellent poem writing by Taksheel Arigam. True hearted son has described his father’s dedication to the family in a simple and true way.
    Pray for your bright academic future.

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  12. Awesome, keep it up.

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    1. Brilliant & Affectionate Poem,
      Written by Dear Taksheel
      for his Dear Papa …….
      I am So Happily Surprised
      to see his Talent at such a Tender age.

      God Bless U Taksheel and I hope Dear,
      U’ll Keep Creating, many more
      Such Cute Poems and may be even
      some Interesting Stories too ……
      For U Dear

      My
      B e s t W i s h e s

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  13. Very nice lines….. Takshil

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  14. Fabulous . Keep it up.

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  15. Wow!!!! Keep it up!!!

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  16. Good going, Keep it up!

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  17. Weldone Takshu . God bless uh wd more nd more success . Luv uh beta

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  18. Super se be Super Hai aapke Papa

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  19. Super se be Super Hai aapke Papa
    Nice one keep going

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    1. Very good. Nice poem. Every child can connect to it. Close to heart.

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  20. Nice poem.
    You described the relation between a father and a child in these few lines.
    Keep it up!!
    God bless you.

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  21. Very Good beta… Keep it up… God bless u always….

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    1. bahut he badiya
      bahut achi poem lagi
      keep it up
      god bless and luv u beta ji

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  22. Nice poem beta. God bless you. Keep it up

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  23. Wonderful beta. Nice poem ,you have written beautiful lines about father which in real sense depicts that father is the backbone of family. Appreciation for ur efforts. Keep it up.

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  24. Beautiful poetry beta, keep going and all the best.

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  25. Vry nice beta…keep it up..bohut acha lga hume yeh..it was so nice nd god bless uh..

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  26. Nice poem
    Valuable message
    God bless u dear
    You

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  27. Nice poem keep it up you don good job don’t stop writing

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  28. Amazing … Beta god bless you and congrats….

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  29. Bhut badya, God Bless

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